in the first one she is more present, she looks more self confident, her body language to me is more natural, also her expression, strong direct and controlling. the background is less dominant in graphical aspect… the bag and hands are great.

here in the first one the background with its strong green takes her some attention away, a little too dominant, the horizon crossing her head, not my thing. the language of her hips looks some staged, stiff in the back… hard shadow under the nose, you dont have it in the first. her facial expression something like on the border to “do you photograph me now?”

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